I really like her outfit - it's rather simple, yet elegant. And yes, her hairstyle is neat. I love the colours you used - the plae blue and light brown work well together.
Oh y e s they are looking BAMF! I could without a doubt see them working as a stealth mage, perhaps even along side Kyne who is also a stealth mage? I love their hair and their fancy uniform <3 LOving those boots <3