|So, I actually managed to write a piece of Seraphine's story. It's just the opening piece (and I still need to add to it) but it's in my stories. The last time I did creative writing for myself (not any assignment), it was poorly-worded and I got unmotivated. That was a year ago (or more). I would REALLY appreciate some detailed feedback, a mix of Positive and Critical would be best. It's only a few paragraphs so it shouldn't take much time to read. Thanks anyone who reads it and gives feedback! Also, if it's easier there's also a forum thread where you can give feedback. Thanks!